ok,
for many of you who have started the paras, the content and ideas are great...for a lot of us there is some work still to do, so we are asking you to revise your 6 paras for Wed....Be sure to use the para template as a guide to help you with building the paras...
If you havent started your paras yet, now is the time!
Some advice for rewrites:
1. be sure keywords link us back to the questions... be sure to start each para with a keyword phrase that makes it really clear which question we are doing...
2. also, no names of people in 3-4-5s' (like mom, etc) those people are just support for the concepts... so bring them in to the para later after the concept is established...
3. Some of you are starting off your 1st para with a kind of overview of the concept of passion... and some of you in you first para are mentioning all 3 of the passions that you have.. i dont think these kinds of "mini" introductions are needed...
its ok to start with, : One of the passions that I have is......
pls bring your revised paras on wed..
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