Monday, March 16, 2015

english 4 , 2nd essay assignment .... Breadgivers


CHABOT COLLEGE—SPRING 2015—2nd PAPER—Eng 4

One of the central claims that James Gilligan makes in his book Violence, and that Mary Pipher makes in her book, Reviving Ophelia, is that girls and women in the United States today are being terribly harmed by something  called the “Girl Code.”  (This code is actually nothing more than the socially expected gender rules for women.) Pipher argues that this Code is everywhere and that girls and women have a hard time not changing their behavior to meet the Code’s guidelines. He goes so far as to say that any girl who resists the code should be called a Hero. And yet, anthropologists have argued that the job of any society is to keep itself growing and prospering. And if this means that some individual members of the society suffer—as long as the society itself is improved--well that is the way it goes.

For this paper you will be investigating these ideas and coming to your own conclusions about whether you think this trade-off (between the needs of women and the needs of a greater society) is worth it.  Here are the questions for you to consider:

What do you think are some elements of this Gender Code for women in the book or movie?
What are the negative consequences for women when they follow the code in the book or movie?
Could the Code offer any Positive benefits for women? For society?
Is Sara a Hero? Why or why not?
Is Sara a Feminist? Why or why not?

Of course you will want to start paragraph topic sentences off with concepts and keywords, while trying to keep people—Reb/Sara—out of that part of the paragraph. They are brought in later to support your concept.
And of course you must integrate quotes from Bread Givers, Hester Street and from any other helpful sources you may have in order to support your points. You need to average 2-3 quotes per page of the paper.

The page minimum is 6 full pages….
—BNDJTM (But Never Do Just The Minimum.)

The first draft is due on March 18

The final draft is due on March 25

Wednesday, March 11, 2015

Homework due Monday March 16 for 102 and 1A

hey there, it is all about the essay #2 now.
As you know, what makes this paper different than #1 is that with this one you are generating your own essay questions.

Previously for HW you were asked to come up with 2 questions that were related to the concept of "Crucial Ones" that is discussed on pg 357-58 of Last Hours. You were then asked to write 3 paras for each question. SO, that means that if you did this, you have actually started doing paper #2.

You were also asked to come up with 6 questions that you could imagine might work for this essay.
You dont HAVE to use the questions you come up with, and we will be talking about what kind of questions work best. However, it is crucial that you attempt to come up with your own questions. And then from there we can revise and tweak them.

That was the PREVIOUS HW, that was due Wed, March 11.

The New HW:

You should bring 6 (more) paragraphs to class on Monday. These will come from 2 more questions that you come up with.

In addition, you should bring to class the 5 or so questions that you think you will be doing for the essay, ALONG WITH the concepts that you will be addressing for each question.

If you have done all the HW, by monday you will have done 12 or so paragraphs, and you will have 5 or so questions decided upon.


here is a link to a transcript for The Road.  It is not exactly what happens in the movie, bc movies are always getting changed as they are made. But it is a good start for pulling quotes. Also, if you have the book, The Road, you are welcome to pull quotes from it.

http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Road,-The.html