Wednesday, May 28, 2014

your paper #4 is due via email by saturday nite , may 31st

Hi alll the classes,,,,
your paper #4 is due via email by saturday nite , may 31st

you want to send to me in both my emails the following:

your blog address
the paper attached to the email
and paper pasted into body of the email....

remember, that on your blog site, you will post your Paper #4 , and it should be made cool and pretty with links and pictures and videos, and links to websites and more...




Tuesday, May 27, 2014

tonight! Tues nite class will start at 730 pm (May 27)

hey there, class will start tonight   at 730 pm    and go to 920 like usual...
 bring your drafts...for paper 4...two copies pls...one for me and one for your partners...

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Monday, May 12, 2014

HW due on Wed, May 14th for the M/W day classes...

In class we started the process of coming up with an outline for the #4 paper.

For this Wed, the 14th, here is what you will do and then bring to class.

Generate a detailed  outline that has 4-5 questions (or areas of discussion ) that you want to explore
Do a rule of 3 on the 4-5 questions.


Tben You will start writing and will be Bringing 4-6 paras  to class this Wed.


As a reminder,  here is the HW that we have assigned over the last week or so:

Chapter one HW had two questions:
What surprised you the most
What are you thinking
2paras for each question

For Ch 2 and 3 and 4, which you are to read, you had one question:
What most interests you? 2 paras for each chapter.

This book is crucial for your manifesto and u should be integrating quotes from the book into the 4-6 paras that u are drafting

Good luck w it!

Wednesday, May 7, 2014

Wed nite class cancelled, pls read this post for further info...

Hey there
I have to miss class tonight but I want to
Give you a heads up about how to get started on paper 4.
The essay itself is posted on the blog here
It's called "new American dream manifesto"

To get started on the process:

Pls do a little research on what a manifesto is to orient yourself. Write a short para about this.

Then generate an outline that has 4 questions (or areas of discussion ) that u want to explore
Do a rule of 3 on the 4 questions
THEN send  the outline and the manifesto para to me via email
Pls send by Friday  and I will get back to u about how it looks

Tben u will start writin and will be Bringin 4-6 paras next week to class


In addition here is reading to be done over the next week
Chapter one HW had two questions:
What surprised you the most
What are you thinking
2paras for each question

For Ch 2 and 3 and 4, which you are to read, you had one question:
What most interests you? 2 paras for each chapter.

This book is crucial for your manifesto and u should be integrating quotes from the book into the 4-6 paras that u are drafting

Good luck w it!

Tuesday, May 6, 2014

Tues night class cancelled tonight --pls check HW in This post

Hey there
I have to miss class tonight but I want to
Give you a heads up about how to get started on paper 4.
The essay itself is posted on the blog here
It's called "new American dream manifesto"

To get started on the process:

Pls do a little research on what a manifesto is to orient yourself. Write a short para about this.

Then generate an outline that has 4 questions (or areas of discussion ) that u want to explore
Do a rule of 3 on the 4 questions
THEN send  the outline and the manifesto para to me via email
Pls send by thurs and I will get back to u about how it looks

Tben u will start writin and will be Bringin 4-6 paras next week to class


In addition here is reading to be done over the next week
Chapter one HW had two questions:
What surprised you the most
What are you thinking
2paras for each question

For Ch 2 and 3 and 4, which you are to read, you had one question:
What most interests you? 2 paras for each chapter.

This book is crucial for your manifesto and u should be integrating quotes from the book into the 4-6 paras that u are drafting

Good luck w it!

Monday, May 5, 2014

Essay #4: New American Dream Manifesto


English —4th Formal Essay —McFarland—Spring—2014

“A New American Dream Manifesto”

For this final major writing assignment, you are being given the opportunity to create your own Manifesto. First off, you will want to find out what a manifesto is, lol. We will be talking about that.

The goal of writing this manifesto is to give you a chance to really take charge of your own thoughts and to consider deeply what and how you think things should be in this country and on this planet.  The manifesto will live on your Web blog, so you will need to include links to research and web sites and photos and videos and graphs, etc, that support what you will be arguing.

This manifesto needs to feature a strong response to the ideas in the Rich and the Rest of US. 

What should the manifesto include:
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

In order to support your points, you need to use the ideas found in the Rich and Rest of us  book, your research, and in any other handouts, info, etc. that we have access to. You are also strongly encouraged to access and integrate support from all the other movies, books, etc we used during the semester. Think of this as a chance for you to offer a comprehensive summing up of what you think, and have been thinking all semester.

You must average a minimum of 3 short quotes per page. You should try to include at least 2 quotes per paragraph. Quote length in a paper of this length should be no more than 1-2 lines.     The essay’s page minimum is 7 full pages…(BNDJTM…)

Paragraph topic sentences should start with concepts. Paragraph topic sentences should also feature KEYWORDS, which are taken from the areas of discussion  that you will be coming up with.

The paper is due Saturday May 31 at 5pm. You will be emailing the Manifesto to me as well as the manifesto link to your web site.

HW related to the Essay #4. (this HW is for the M/W classes.

You need to read the book! Chapter one HW had two questions:
What surprised you the most
What are you thinking
2paras for each question

For Ch 2 and 3 and 4, which you are to read, you had one question:
What most interests you? 2 paras for each chapter.

This book is crucial for your manifesto.

Speaking of the Manifesto. For next class, revisit the brainstorm you did about what you want to put in your manifesto. Revise, expand, your ideas. THEN, look to the book for support. So, you will bring to class your brainstorm (on its way to being an outline) and you will have a set of citations from the book you can use, with page numbers.