HI Monday class... here is what we are doing

HI Monday class... here is what we are doing... you will hand me your HW tonight in class, with your email address written on the top of the HW...(BTW, The HW was generate an outline, and write 2-3 paras--none of which you did...yo)

here is the new stuff....emale ---by Wed night ---the FIRST HW...(outline and 2-3 paras)

then i will email back advice...

then here is the new HW....

--You will revise the outline based the awesome advice i give freely and with respect--and you will resend the new outline, back to me by next monday night....

ONce we have done this...you need to do your rough draft based on the outline... the rough draft will be due on the 27th....
the outline itself should be really specfic...basically we should know every para that you are going to do... (that means 9-12 paras....)