SOme advice on doing the Sustainablity Center proposal...

hey there,

so the advice here can work for both Q#1 and Q#3.

Basically, we are suggesting that you move from general to specific in your paras...

GENERAL: in this para (or 2 paras) you would talk about the general shape, size, structure of the building. Don't just say "it will be a circle"--give us more detail about size, number of floors, special shape, etc.

MIDDLE: in these 2-3 paras you would talk about the specific spaces--what happens in the different rooms or spaces in your center


SPECIFIC: in these 2-3 paras you would talk about specific building features....such as solar, or water, art installations, etc...


Of course you will also want to talk about building materials that you are using, and that kind of thing... that kind kind of stuff can go  in the "SPECIFIC" or the GENERAL paras....


For the QA#3, instead of "building" you would substitute "garden" in the advice above...