Next Homework steps for paper #1 (and a new question added to the essay)

As you know, your first step in doing this essay was to create 6 paragraphs (by doing Rule of 3 for 2 questions of your choice.) . We went over these in class or by email.  If you were given advice about how to revise or adjust your first 6 paragraphs, you should be doing that. (Most of the advice had to do with pushing para length. Follow the Para template advice to do this.)

If you did NOT show me any of your paragraphs in class, you need to send them to me via email ASAP so I can offer any advice.
smcfarland@chabotcollege.edu

NEW HOMEWORK

The next step now is to do 3 more paragraphs, by doing Rule of 3 on another question.

At your next class, you should bring all 9 paragraphs.


NEW QUESTION

In class we went over a new question that has been added to the assignment.
I realized that before you could design a dream school, you probably would want to think about what kind of student you want your school to create. So here is the question for you to consider:

When a student graduates from your school, what would you want them to Be, or Feel, or Think, or Know?

Try to be specific, creative, surprising, in your answer. See if you can go beyond generalities in your answers. If you do this question, you should Rule of 3 it like we do with all our questions.